Sunday, June 2, 2013

Rough Draft

Hello everybody, it's Nikki! So I poster the outline for my essay a few days ago and I just finished writing the rough draft. I added more information onto my rough draft because I felt that I needed more information since my outline didn't have a lot. Well here is my rough draft guys......

Rough Draft
Have you ever thought of rescuing an animal from your local animal shelter? Well chances are that most animals in a shelter have been victims of animal cruelty.
There are many types of animal cruelty which can be found anywhere and happen to different kinds of animals, not just to dogs or cats and we need to become aware of this and learn not just how to prevent it but also learn the facts about animal cruelty.
 Animal cruelty happens everywhere and to all types of animals. According to http://legal-dictionary.thefreedictionary.com/Animal+cruelty, animal cruelty is the crime of inflicting physical pain, suffering or death on an animal. Also according to www.humanesociety.org, an organization dedicated to helping all animals, gave an estimate of how many animals were abused in 2007 which only had a 1,880 reported cases of animal cruelty. Since most cases of animal cruelty are never reported, we will never know the exact number of animals who are abused. In 2007, 1,212 cases involved dogs, 337 cases involved cats, and 470 cases involved other animals.
Investigations into slaughter houses have revealed that animals are also abused in factory farms. There were 20 reported neglect cases involving cows and eight involving pig neglect. Animal cruelty has many sources and can be traced back for many years. According to www.learntogive.org, animal cruelty has many origins. In this website we learn that people have found entertainment in abusing animals since ancient times. For example dog fighting can be traced back to the 12th century. The British began exporting their dogs to be used in fights against larger animals.
Cockfighting has roots in American history with many of the founding fathers being fond of this sport which is now illegal in all 50 states. 
Another source of animal cruelty is due to farming. The abuse of farm animals didn’t show an influx until the early 19th century. Most farm animals are forced to endure physical and psychological abuse. Most animals are given steroids to enhance growth and antibiotics to fend off illnesses that are likely to occur in the unsanitary conditions they live in. 
 According to http://www.dosomething.org/tipsandtools/11-facts-about-puppy-mills, puppy mills are also a source of animal cruelty. A puppy mill is a commercial dog-breading facility that focuses on increasing profit with little cost. The animal’s health is not of top priority for people running puppy mills. In puppy mills, animals can spend most of their lives in cages with no room to play or exercise. Puppies in mills are usually found with bleeding or swollen paws, feet falling through the wire cages, severe tooth decay, ear infections, dehydration, and lesions on their eyes which often lead to blindness. Only 26 states in the US have laws to regulate commercial kennels to prevent animal abuse and cruelty.
According to http://www.paws.org/kids-animal-cruelty.html people are cruel to animals because they don’t understand that they are actually causing pain to the animals. People that have been abused themselves will abuse animals because they think that is the only way to treat others. Some people don’t see animals as creatures but they see them as objects instead. The worst type of animal cruelty is when people know they are inflicting pain on an animal. 
So you want to help put a stop to animal cruelty?  There are many easy things that you can do to help these animals in danger. On http://www.aspca.org/fight-animal-cruelty/top-10-ways-to-prevent-animal.aspx you can find 10 ways to prevent animal cruelty. One very easy thing you can do to prevent animal cruelty is simply by setting a good example to other pet owners. Always show your pets the love and good care they deserve. Be responsible with your pets, have them spayed or neutered.
 Animal cruelty is seen everywhere and affects many animals. Without people and organizations to stand up for the poor abused animals, animals will continue to suffer for no reason. Animal cruelty has to stop and for that to happen, we need to bring awareness over these cruel action. With this project I hope to make people more aware of animal cruelty and teach them what they can do to help these innocent animals. Let’s help bring a stop to animal cruelty!
 

1 comment:

  1. i like the part where you put "Dont got much in the bank we go out she order the steak like why you do that"

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