Essay Outline

Hello friends! I'm Nikki and I have decided to write an essay for my Animal Cruelty project. To make the writing process easier I made an outline for my essay. I included the main points I wanted to talk about in my essay and a few helpful websites. I hope this outline let's you guys understand more about Animal Cruelty. So here is my essay outline.

TOPIC: Animal Cruelty

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Attention Grabber:

                Have you ever thought of rescuing an animal from your local animal shelter? Well chances are that most animals in a shelter have been victims of animal cruelty.

                Thesis: there are many types of animal cruelty which can be found anywhere and happen to different kinds of animals, not just to dogs or cats and we need to become aware of this and learn not just how to prevent is but also learn the facts.

 Paragraph 2) What is the problem: Animal cruelty endangers many animals and t

What is  wrong with my topic is: animal cruelty happens everywhere and to all kinds of animals.

·         Websites with information regarding above issue: (This answer alone for your reference, not part of the essay)

·         http://legal-dictionary.thefreedictionary.com/Animal+cruelty

·         http://www.humanesociety.org

·         Why is this a problem? (This and everything else needs to be apart of the essay.)

_This is a problem because most cases are never reported and unrecognized.

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·         2 proofs from the websites that explain why the above is a problem.   (According too)

1.       According too blah blah blah webstie, Global Warming is:____________________________

§  Why does the above fact about your topic matter to everyone else:

_This means that (give statiscs.) many animals are being abused and even though we have staticcs these are estimates because most cases go without notice and animals are left victims of our ignorance. ____________________________________________________________________

2.       ___According too blah blah blah ________________________________________________

§  Why does the above fact about your topic matter to everyone else:this means that cute little innocent animals are being harmed and killed without anybody knowing.

·         http://www.dosomething.org/tipsandtools/11-facts-about-puppy-mills

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           How did this Happen:  (History of Animal Cruelty)

           What caused this: Animal cruelty has many sources and be traced back for many years.

Websites with information regarding above issue:

http://learningtogive.org/papers/paper359.html

·         How did it happen

It happened because; Animal cruelty has begun for many reasons such as entertainment and farming.

2 Proofs from the website that explain why the above is a problem.   (According too)

 1.       _According to learntogive.org website, Animal cruelty is happening because,… people have found entertainment in abusing animals for many, many years. Even police officers have been known to take part in the entertainment of abusing animals.

§  Why does the above fact about your topic matter to everyone else:

_This means that: even back when animal cruelty first began, it was seen very lightly and not as a major issue, even police officers participated. 1. 1.       According to learntogive.org website: Another reason animal cruelty is happening is…. Because of farming.

§  Why does the above fact about your topic matter to everyone else:

___This means that: mostl farm animals are forced to endure physical and psychological abuse for months if not years on end. 

Paragraph 4   (NOW WHAT)

How Can We Fix it:  http://www.aspca.org/fight-animal-cruelty/top-10-ways-to-prevent-animal.aspx

According too blah blah blah website we could fix this in many ways such as reporting animal cruelty, getting to know animals in your neighborhood, and even setting a good example for others.

·         How would the above idea fix the problems you mentioned above: This would fix it because we need to make sure that the abuse is being reported and not ignored. We must also become informed about animal cruelty and how to prevent it.

Why is this better than before?

__This is better than before because: people are starting to learn more and more about animal cruelty and finding ways to stop it. 

 Paragraph 5:  Conclusion: Tell reader what they need to do now.  Ask yourself why did I Write this?                                  Do not directly say:  “I told you this because”.

To help the animals in end and prevent other animals from being abused in the future.